Writing Issues

Avoid Ambiguity

since --> because
while --> although, whereas
method --> technique, approach
if --> whether

Avoid Strong Words

always --> often

Avoid Informal Words

though --> although
above --> preceding
very well --> satisfactorily, sufficiently
enough --> sufficient
as far as we know --> within our knowledge
means --> indicates, represents
will --> plan to, shall, do

Our future work plans to ...

Section 5 describes the experiments...
Firstly, Secondly, ..., Finally --> First, Second, ..., Finally

(Also okay for firstly, but may better stick on one form.)
A, otherwise, B --> A; otherwise, B / A. Otherwise, B

same for however, therefore.
can not, can't --> cannot
don't --> do not
current --> existing
space limitation --> space limit.
more and more --> increasingly
note ... --> note that ...

Avoid Complicated Words

utilize --> use

Which vs That

restrictive clause: that (without preceding comma)

限定性定语从句, 对于句意有关键影响.

"My bike that is broken is in the garage."

强调我坏了的那辆车在车库里，暗示我可能有不只一辆车。
non-restrictive clause: which (with preceding comma)

非限定性定语从句, 补充信息, 不会对句意产生关键影响.

"My bike, which is broken, is in the garage."

说明我的车在车库里，补充说明这车坏了。

ABC, which is the best method, ... [OK]

ABC that is the best method ... [OK]

ABC which is the best method ... [WRONG]

ABC, that is the best method, ... [WRONG]

Misc

No need to add "the" before Figure/Table 1.
Do not put "And", "Also" in the beginning of the sentence.
"," before "respectively"
"," before "e.g.", "i.e."
"A, B, and/or C"
Do not use citation as a part of the sentence.

e.g., "Tools proposed in [2]" --> "Tools proposed by AAA et al. [2]"

Uncountable

work: use several pieces of work.
research: use several research projects.
software: use several software programs.

Abbreviation

ABC (Aaa Bbb Ccc) --> Aaa Bbb Ccc (ABC)

As follows

The paper makes the following contributions.
We list the contributions as follows / as below:

we list the contributions below [WRONG]